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ShresthaShree Chankuu wrote a new post 7 years, 9 months ago
Loud Louder You scream
Loud
Louder
You Scream
And say – “Don’t you dream?”
But I dare
Though you scare
Because I don’t care
So, even when you scream
I dream.
High
Higher
I dream
And lift […]
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ShresthaShree Chankuu wrote a new post 7 years, 12 months ago
“I am a vegan.” Boom.
“I love rainy season.” Boom. Boom.
“And I love Taylor Swift.” Boom. Boom. Boom.
The person sitting by me in the café is telling about her likes and dislikes. And I’m already getting […]
Hello. I’m probably a year late in this regard, but I liked your story. It has a little bit of mystery on it, and a little grace in the writing. The ending, however, is a little let down for me. If you are making a narrator unreliable, there must be some underlying reasons behind it. Why would he/she want to lie to the readers? If you are writing for yourself, then I think it is absolutely fine. But if you are writing for a certain reader, or if you intend to be a professional writer, you might want to consider this.
Cheers.