-
Anonymous wrote a new post 8 years, 4 months ago
I could see sisters and brothers celebrating Bhai Tika with much joy while I, on the other hand, could not celebrate it. I am someone who is very fond of lights, colors, flowers, and dogs. Since all […]
-
Satish Tripathi wrote a new post 8 years, 4 months ago
आजकल सपनी हरुमा म
झरना देख्छु
खोला देख्छु
मेरो पुरानो गाउ देख्छु
घर माथिको देबिथानको डाडो देख्छु
सपनी मै बास्छ झ्याउकिरि
मेरो सपनाले अचेल पुरै एक फन्को लगाउछ मेरो गाउ !को […]
-
ShresthaShree Chankuu wrote a new post 8 years, 5 months ago
Loud Louder You scream
Loud
Louder
You Scream
And say – “Don’t you dream?”
But I dare
Though you scare
Because I don’t care
So, even when you scream
I dream.
High
Higher
I dream
And lift […]
-
Sweta wrote a new post 8 years, 5 months ago
and, you think we are equal
And, you think you and I are equal (Pic: Derek Sherman at Celery Blog)I thought God created us equal,
With bodies and biological realities,
With desires and […]
-
Joshan wrote a new post 8 years, 6 months ago
A THOUGHT
Living in the dark, searching for the light
Moving through the hurdles
Looking for scattered dreams
I one day thought, who am I?Guilt, sorrows, pain and everything […]
-
Durga wrote a new post 8 years, 6 months ago
For past couple of weeks, I have been thinking to go back to the shop from where I had once brought a wrapping paper. It wasn’t like the ordinary (or say, the general) wrapping paper (something I realized […]
-
Bikul Koirala wrote a new post 8 years, 6 months ago
(Excerpt: Dreams from Nepal – A Novel)
Ram watched the boys intently as they got the meal together and began the cooking. It was a simple procedure and Ram was sure he could do this right away. Maybe taking on […]
-
bineshshrestha75 wrote a new post 8 years, 6 months ago
It’s been a while,
every night feels the same,
Metaphorically speaking, it’s like the pages of a notebook,
exactly replicated.
What differs are those little spots and marks,
on some pages there is more and in […]
-
Ashma wrote a new post 8 years, 6 months ago
I don’t wish to tame your free soul.
You need not complete me.
Just walk by my side,
we shall discover the enigma of the skipping beat,
and search for the cause of the Adrenaline rush.Just walk by my […]
-
Raman Paneru wrote a new post 8 years, 6 months ago
एनी फ्रान्क : द डायरी अफ अ योङ्ग गर्ल
सनिवार, जुन २०, १९४२
मजस्ताका लागी डायरीमा लेख्नु साँच्चिकै अनौठो अनुभव हो । मैले पहिले कहिल्यै नलेखेकाले मात्रै होइन, बरु एउटा तेह्र वर्षे स्कुले किसोरीको सोचहरुलाई प […]
-
bineshshrestha75 wrote a new post 8 years, 6 months ago
There are a number of names people use to mention him, “Mental”, “Thhiss”, “Pagal” and even “Baula”. I remember seeing him walk around like a sane person before, but now he’s changed.
As I recall, he became […]
-
shilpapoudel wrote a new post 8 years, 7 months ago
In Your Eyes, Beholder, An Undeviating Spark
Instead of worrying about the wrinkles on your face,
think about becoming kinder and gentler
think about leaving a positive mark on the world.
No matter how […]
-
Promishra wrote a new post 8 years, 7 months ago
I am Still Living Those Dreams: For a Relationship Like No Other: She told me, “You won’t understand my feelings unless you part ways with someone who loved you more than everything in their life.” “And […]
-
ImperisableOasis wrote a new post 8 years, 7 months ago
Cover image from Jetli.com
Have you ever gotten a chance to see double rainbows? Double rainbows rarely appear and only a few people ever get a chance to see them. And Jet Li was one of those who recently s […]
-
Editor's Desk wrote a new post 8 years, 7 months ago
Ateet Shrestha returned from Australia with a decade’s worth of experience and a vision to build something at home, in Nepal. Working as a professional chef in Australia for almost 10 years, he had found his p […]
-
bineshshrestha75 wrote a new post 8 years, 7 months ago
The girl with a mask on
People often misunderstood her for
any other normal girl
but she was different.
She put on a mask
that would fool everyone,
except for her own self.
She neither put on […]
-
Prem Chaudhary wrote a new post 8 years, 7 months ago
One eventful morning, I was getting ready to go to the hospital for a regular check-up. It wasn’t until I reached the hospital, that I found out that my doctor would be arriving an hour late. I couldn’t go hom […]
-
wricha117 wrote a new post 8 years, 7 months ago
Cover Image: “Don’t feel shy – It’s just a period!” A mural created by Putali-Nepal in collaboration with Sattya, Media Arts Collective for Menstrual Hygiene Day 2016. You can find it on a zoo-wall behind the zoo […]
-
ShresthaShree Chankuu wrote a new post 8 years, 7 months ago
“I am a vegan.” Boom.
“I love rainy season.” Boom. Boom.
“And I love Taylor Swift.” Boom. Boom. Boom.
The person sitting by me in the café is telling about her likes and dislikes. And I’m already getting […]
-
Supriya wrote a new post 8 years, 7 months ago
His love was a lie
I dressed in red,
added colors to my lips,
did my hair right,
and walked miles to him
Yes once again I tried
and yet again he lied.
He looked at me
didn’t find me pretty
for the girl h […]
- Load More
Hello. I’m probably a year late in this regard, but I liked your story. It has a little bit of mystery on it, and a little grace in the writing. The ending, however, is a little let down for me. If you are making a narrator unreliable, there must be some underlying reasons behind it. Why would he/she want to lie to the readers? If you are writing for yourself, then I think it is absolutely fine. But if you are writing for a certain reader, or if you intend to be a professional writer, you might want to consider this.
Cheers.