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Promishra wrote a new post 8 years, 10 months ago
I am Still Living Those Dreams: For a Relationship Like No Other: She told me, “You won’t understand my feelings unless you part ways with someone who loved you more than everything in their life.” “And […]
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ImperisableOasis wrote a new post 8 years, 10 months ago
Cover image from Jetli.com
Have you ever gotten a chance to see double rainbows? Double rainbows rarely appear and only a few people ever get a chance to see them. And Jet Li was one of those who recently s […]
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Editor's Desk wrote a new post 8 years, 10 months ago
Ateet Shrestha returned from Australia with a decade’s worth of experience and a vision to build something at home, in Nepal. Working as a professional chef in Australia for almost 10 years, he had found his p […]
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bineshshrestha75 wrote a new post 8 years, 10 months ago
The girl with a mask on
People often misunderstood her for
any other normal girl
but she was different.
She put on a mask
that would fool everyone,
except for her own self.
She neither put on […]
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Prem Chaudhary wrote a new post 8 years, 10 months ago
One eventful morning, I was getting ready to go to the hospital for a regular check-up. It wasn’t until I reached the hospital, that I found out that my doctor would be arriving an hour late. I couldn’t go hom […]
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wricha117 wrote a new post 8 years, 11 months ago
Cover Image: “Don’t feel shy – It’s just a period!” A mural created by Putali-Nepal in collaboration with Sattya, Media Arts Collective for Menstrual Hygiene Day 2016. You can find it on a zoo-wall behind the zoo […]
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ShresthaShree Chankuu wrote a new post 8 years, 11 months ago
“I am a vegan.” Boom.
“I love rainy season.” Boom. Boom.
“And I love Taylor Swift.” Boom. Boom. Boom.
The person sitting by me in the café is telling about her likes and dislikes. And I’m already getting […]
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Supriya wrote a new post 8 years, 11 months ago
His love was a lie
I dressed in red,
added colors to my lips,
did my hair right,
and walked miles to him
Yes once again I tried
and yet again he lied.
He looked at me
didn’t find me pretty
for the girl h […]
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Samrachana Pant wrote a new post 8 years, 11 months ago
Dog and Human
Some things about what dogs are like in nature and what dogs may have to say to the human beings. A bond between the two that I have tried to express in a poem.
I was born to play
And lay
On a […]
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suweeeiii wrote a new post 8 years, 11 months ago
HALF AND HALF
When the rain and the sun will be too busy sharingtheir pain with droplets
and a hint of sunshine
and
forget to care about you and your umbrella
I […]
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randompilgrim wrote a new post 8 years, 11 months ago
ली क्वान यूको प्रभाव यति प¥यो कि मैले नेपालबाटै उनको बारेमा टम प्लेटले लेखेको ‘ली क्वान यूसँगको वार्तालाप’ पुस्तक मगाएर पढ्न भ्याए । उनको उदार आर्थिक नितीले सम्भव भएकाे सिंगापुरको प्रगत […]
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bhawanashrestha wrote a new post 8 years, 11 months ago
To you,
with an enduring love,
Right now, I am not being able to sleep. I can feel my belly churning. It seems like my ovary is high today(haha). The pimples on my face are giving me some extra pain, […]
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bhaskardhakal wrote a new post 8 years, 11 months ago
2 Am Musing-
“I just want to tell you nothing
You don’t want to hear
All I want is for you to say
Oh why don’t you just take me
Where I’ve never been before
I know you want to hear me
Catch my breath […]
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bineshshrestha75 wrote a new post 8 years, 11 months ago
If I die today.
I would fade away like those petals
which fall away as the winter embarks,
my makeup would switch its color
like those leaves as the autumn starts.
My body would be as cold as the chilled […]
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Supriya wrote a new post 8 years, 11 months ago
Jane was finally getting married to him. He is an engineer. He belongs to a good family. He has his own house and gets a good salary every month. His parents live in their own house so she won’t h […]
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Sabita wrote a new post 9 years ago
Nobody’s Child, Wandering in the Street
(Cover image from UNICEF)
An empty belly,
But eyes heavy
Loaded with tears,
Hope tries to float,
Despite all fears!So is the heart,
Was safe in […]
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hitesha wrote a new post 9 years ago
Cutcrease Variation In blushPink
Hope everybody is having a great week! Finally, its feels warm and that hint of summer is at our door. spring and fall are my favorite weather time and I love that […]
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WolvesOfWords wrote a new post 9 years, 1 month ago
Circling in an abyss, with what seems forever; a constant loop of thoughts and emotions; it’s as if we’re screaming at the top of our lungs yet the muffled voice reaching nowhere. Lying in bed, eyes wide open, sta […]
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wricha117 wrote a new post 9 years, 1 month ago
The Battlefield
Yet again,
The fire in me has died a little.
In this big universe,
I felt like a very small matter.
Something that occupied space
And had mass.
That was the only matter I could […]
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Sabita wrote a new post 9 years, 2 months ago
Do you feel the same?
Do you feel the same?
Like the mountains,
Pure and high
Emotions and the soul
An urge, to touch the sky
And beautiful, like a butterfly!
Passionate, to […]
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Hello. I’m probably a year late in this regard, but I liked your story. It has a little bit of mystery on it, and a little grace in the writing. The ending, however, is a little let down for me. If you are making a narrator unreliable, there must be some underlying reasons behind it. Why would he/she want to lie to the readers? If you are writing for yourself, then I think it is absolutely fine. But if you are writing for a certain reader, or if you intend to be a professional writer, you might want to consider this.
Cheers.